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Ken Adams is the leading authority on how to say clearly whatever you want to say in a contract. He’s author of A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting, and he offers online and in-person training around the world. He’s also chief content officer of LegalSifter, Inc., a company that combines artificial intelligence and expertise to assist with review of contracts.
I’ve got a slightly different take on this from either Ken or D.C. I think the real term of art that got mangled here was “[Intentionally Omitted].” Normally, when I see that expression, it functions in exactly the way D.C. described, as a means of preserving paragraph numbering. In fact, in my recollection (which may now be skewed because of this case), one usually omits the title of the section as well as its text. The failure to do this is what got the court in a tizzy: if there was nothing to indicate that there had been any concessions, etc., granted to the tenant, it would have been more difficult to construct the argument that mysterious cyphers really amounted to unknown concessions.
Ken’s larger point, though, is valid: don’t rely on a magic label to do the heavy lifting when it’s possible to describe the results you want (and if you can’t, or dare not, describe the results you want, you or your client probably shouldn’t want them). In my experience, at least here in Massachusetts, courts don’t distinguish between “extend” and “renew” as radically as they do in Minnesota (and, I guess, Texas), and look to what the parties intended–which, in most leases and other contracts I read, tend to be spelled out.
Vance: You make a great point—I’ll be sure to incorporate it in MSCD3. Ken