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Excluding from a “Force Majeure” Provision Inability to Comply with a Payment Obligation

[Updated January 9, 2012, to reflect a change to my February 2011 post prompted by Vance Koven’s comment to this post.] In this February 2011 post I offered my version of a force-majeure provision. It included the following: For purposes of this agreement, “Force Majeure Event” means, with respect to a party, any event or circumstance, regardless of whether it … Read More

On Always Using Two Digits to State the Day Component of a Date

There’s no end to the surprises. Evidently, I need to get out more. In the immediately precedent post, the one about DLA Piper’s “Document Factory,” I said the following: The date I specified as the “effective date” was stated in the output document’s introductory clause as “January 01, 2012,” with the redundant zero. I assume that’s due to a limitation … Read More

Dubious Document Assembly: DLA Piper’s “Document Factory”

This post from last October contains my report card on Rocket Lawyer’s document-assembly confidentiality agreement. My conclusion? It stinks. In this recent post on his blog, Bill Carleton included a link to the “Document Factory Starter Kit” offered by the global law firm DLA Piper. Here’s how DLA Piper describes it: This Starter Kit will enable you to generate basic … Read More

This Blog, One Year In

Last December, I mothballed the AdamsDrafting blog and fired up The Koncise Drafter. If I were concerned about my stats, that move would have been a disaster—as it’s home to four years of my musings, the AdamsDrafting blog still gets about three times as many hits as The Koncise Drafter. But I’m not selling ads and don’t have to meet … Read More

Language of Recommendation?

Hot on the heels of my notion of “language of intention” comes a candidate for yet another new category of contract language: language of recommendation. Consider the following extract from a stock option agreement (emphasis added): As a result, the Company strongly recommends that the Grantee not rely on the information in this Appendix as the only source of information relating to … Read More

How to Say that a Limited Liability Company Is Manager-Managed

Recently I’ve been exploring the gray areas of categories-of-contract-language analysis. (For example, go here for my trial balloon regarding “language of intention.”) Well, it’s time to consider another such issue. In my seminars and my course at Penn Law, we consider a series of “before” and “after” examples designed to highlight categories-of-contract-language issues. Here’s one of those examples, drawn from … Read More

“Strictly”

When you add verbiage to a contract provision not to change its meaning but to make it more emphatic, you’re indulging in “rhetorical emphasis.” Contract prose is better off without rhetorical emphasis, as contracts don’t serve to persuade. I’ve mentioned rhetorical emphasis plenty over the years; go here for a listing of posts on the old AdamsDrafting blog that mention … Read More

An Article on “Sole and Absolute Discretion”

Reader Steven Sholk told me about this article on the phrase sole and absolute discretion that appeared last week in the New York Law Journal. It focuses on New York caselaw. Having written an article of my own on the implications of this phrase (available here), I was interested to see what the article had to say. But it doesn’t … Read More

Holiday Quiz: Rate Your Contract Drafter!

Unsure whether you should be paying someone at the law firm of Preen & Strut $600 an hour to draft your contracts? Or uncertain whether a member of your in-house legal staff is doing a good job with your templates? Well, take the following quiz and all will be revealed! (In the quiz, the phrase “your guy” is gender-neutral.) A … Read More

Revisiting “Represents and Warrants”: Bryan Garner’s View

I’ve written lots about represents and warrants (and representations and warranties), culminating in a series of posts a couple of years ago. See, in reverse chronological order, this post, this post, this post, and this post. With the last of those posts, I felt as if for the time being I’d said pretty much all I could say. And I felt … Read More