About the author
Ken Adams is the leading authority on how to say clearly whatever you want to say in a contract. He’s author of A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting, and he offers online and in-person training around the world. He’s also chief content officer of LegalSifter, Inc., a company that combines artificial intelligence and expertise to assist with review of contracts.
…not to mention, as a practicing attorney, this is the sort of thing that can keep you up at night.
Drafts produced by document assembly will generally need further amendment to fit to the precise deal, so you can never eliminate the risk of manual incompetence. Of course, I agree document assembly reduces that risk by reducing the number of amendments made manually.
Still, I think that any lawyer as incompetent as the one that drafted this could find a way to get himself sued in any scenario. Some people just need their drafting license revoked.
W: Yes, document assembly often represents a first step. But I assumed that alternative vesting schedules would have been a rational component of any document-assembly questionnaire devised to create the employment agreements at issue in this dispute.
I suspect that the person at fault in this case was some low-level functionary. One benefit of document assembly is that it can be used to take discretion away from people who aren’t equipped to handle it.
Ken
Westmorlandia: Although this mistake could not have occurred without incompetence, it indicates a quality control problem, also. The quality control system of the firm that produced the document either broke down or, more likely, was ineffective generally or non-existent.
In his book The Checklist Manifesto Atul Gawande demonstres the effectiveness of a quality control tool as simple as a checklist to avoid mistakes resulting from our own incompetence. It’s not necessarily that we don’t know what we’re doing, but that we can’t think of everything every time. As long as every contract is drafted and reviewed on an ad hoc basis without external quality control tools, unnecessary mistakes will be made by otherwise competent attorneys.
I agree with Ken that this is one of the benefits of technologies like document automation applications. Besides leaving less of the drafting to the mind of the drafter (and thus reducing the likelihood of mistakes of inattention), the document templates themselves can be improved as issues are identified through the repeated use of the templates.